Creative Mr Tomokino Writing
Use the five senses to describe Mr Tomokino sick at home
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Hi my name is Akeel Patel and I will be describing Mr Tomokino sick at home. At home I bet he has the heater blasting warm air on his skin. All the people are probably tell him that he looks miserable and needs to rest. He needs to close the door and shut his eyes. He hears everyone in the house like his my brothers and others going to work.
At about 12:30 he should wake up. He walks to the kitchen and while he am doing that, he am moaning and groaning. The moment he reaches that kitchen his nose could smell something really nice. Mr Tomokino smelt the air and it smelt like something warm and something very nice. It was his breakfast. As Mr Tomokino sits down on the soft, comfortable sofa, he needs to just relax and have the Television (TV). Mr Tomokino digs into his tasty WeetBix and puts on his warm blanket. I hope he feels a bit better tomorrow and I am looking forward to seeing him back at school.